(गजल)
छुपाएर पीर ब्यथा उमंगका गीत लेख्छु
हार होइन जिन्दगीका, सारा आफ्ना जित लेख्छु,
उपहार पाएका यी चोटहरु दबाएर,
तिरस्कार होइन हजूर म ता सधै प्रीत लेख्छु
किन बेच्नु आफ्नो आँसू खित्काउनेहरु बिच,
सुनाउन्न सारा कथा डाहा गर्नेहरु बिच
भादौरे त्यों भेलमा पनि बिहानीको सीत लेख्छु
तिरस्कार होइन हजूर म ता सधै प्रीत लेख्छु
डर लाग्छ मेरो गीत दर्द बनी पोखिन्छ की,
उज्यालो त्यों उनको दिलमा काड़ा भई रोपिन्छ की.
पीर तिम्लाई पर्छ भने नगाएकै हित देख्छु
तिरस्कार होइन हजूर म त सधै प्रीत लेख्छु
तिलक पौडेल
(क्यालिफोर्निया)
Filed under: Bhutanusa Literary Corner Tagged: | literature
thanks 4 u r nice gajal.i reaily like it how sweetly u wrote this gajal …… so i wish u all the best of luck.let’s hope tilak bhai gives us a nice gajal like that of this.
grt!gajal where i also see sometimes see in the pain n sometimes in optimist.
really great poem.it can touch the heart of people
so i wish u to publish this types of poems future also.
WoH!!!!!!! Awesome man, How you could do that. Great job. Seems like personal man.
such a nice n,peace full article.hope and future can seeing here.. thxx for share urs article.inside in human lifes,here every time need to keep our dreems n hope.
tilak my amigo, ur gajal is awesome.
u know one thing love is like that.
everything is fair but gives pain too.
but my fren, keep on writing more.
im always ur wellwisher and i know u r the best of every thing.
ur “gajal” is two thumbs up.
remember the days passed in ‘the kalahari’ and just smile.
nice gajal, flawless……………………………………
Tilak dai….ur the man keep it up……lovely and tochy poem for me…