साहित्य शनिबार

मैले गर्नु
थिर थापा
(होबार्ट,अस्ट्रलिया)

कठोर कर्तव्यको भूमरिबाट
संसारलाई आज हेर्नुछ।
अध्यारोमा दियो जलाई
आज सफलता चुम्नुछ।।

त्यो अतितले अझै झस्काउँछ
मायामा डुवी आज भुल्नुछ।
त्यसैले होला म त्रसित छु
आफैले आफुलाई बदल्नुछ।।

7 Responses

  1. hai good poeam yar so sweet

  2. bhumiputra says:
    2010/01/30 at 11:01 am
    Your sweety peom makes me remember Nepal NOT bhutan.If you were bhutanese then you would have been in the cradle of motherland.Your crocodiles tear will not make you Bhutanese.

  3. Guys ! Namaskar!!

    I request you guys to stop the literary section so as to coordinate to the bhutaneseliterature.com

    Let bhutaneseliterature.com concerntrates on the literary areneas and you guys go with news and social issues. If you can come on, go ahead to deal the global concerns on the Bhutan’s purposed future and happinesses.

    If you make cabuli of subjectives you will reach none specific destination.

    The articles saturday can be changed in to another heading which may be best than this. If You cordinate to the bhutaneseliterature.com you may receive the same from them. will not this be a good approach to our harmony and better understanding? Soon the articles published in bhutaneseliterature .com will be more refined and constructive criticism in possible only in Bhutaneseliterature.com. I hope you guys will understand it.

    Bhutanese writers should think about going to a right place. Today, the time has come to be specific in subject matter to get better response from the targetted readers. Let us culture giving the zenithsome material to the perfect media and get correct and constructive criticism. The time has come to analyse this matter dynamically, otherwise we may suffer it in days ahead

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  4. Hi Thirji,
    I like the sentiment of the poem and it is wonderful. You gotta stick on your words dude..Do bring some more creations related to our cause and sufferings.
    Be cool if you get criticized for you on the way to achieving milestone.
    God bless you.

    pardeshi Tara, USA

  5. hello i am netra adhikari from north dakota united states, actually sahitiya sanibar ko post harulai decrease garda kasto hola. becouse news is a most important thing. haina ra?

  6. Thirji your poem is wonderful , thanks carry on

  7. Your sweety peom makes me remember Nepal NOT bhutan.If you were bhutanese then you would have been in the cradle of motherland.Your crocodiles tear will not make you Bhutanese.

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